You know the credits are good stuff...is that your's Ivan? Are you using FCP and Joe's Filters?
But the shots need to be less rushed and more believable..ie touching the talent and she looks around like what is happening...just blows the reality away. Not too mention the acting. I realize there is little you can do about the latter.
Although one of these days, someone is going to spend the time and money to do a modern psycho porn flick right...
You're a good shooter, and I like your collection of super 8's. Keep up the good work.
Zig Zigman