I love how people say they don't have time yet they just wrote a novella they expect us to read and pontificate back with lengthy answers.
It's not a novel. Is some fiction written in a forum/blog. Chapter by chapter. The readers can take decisions about the plot. And not, I am not a professional writer, is a hobby.
Regarding my daily free time, I don't have to explain my day-life to anyone, specially people I don't know in person. If you want to help me or say something useful, you're welcome.
But anyway, I don't know why I opened this post here. So for me is everything said. If a moderator wants to close it, ok. If someone wants to use it for other things, ok too.
Sorry for the grammar mistakes. I will try to improve my writing here.