to see if she actually understands what she wrote, and assuming it was her and not some Monstar type manning the copy/paste controls, try asking her to boil that down to 6 or 7 sentences, in her own words. wait for the blank expression. wait. there it is.

it's utterly mechanical, like the manual to a microwave oven. i hope she fucks better than she writes. you're writing for an intended audience of laypeople, dullard. citing the DSM manual and case studies is the best way to lose people fast, but at least those came built-in to the net sourced sections, which is 90% of it. basing the whole thing around his claims of a past diagnosis also blows hyena in terms of any perceived cred she might've otherwise gotten away with.

If we're going to analyze Steve Driver, let's do it XPT style. gimme a few.