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Oh shit! You got him.

Monkey, I know after a zinger like this you just want to crawl into a hole and never come back. But I promise, your time will come. It's not always this bad.

I think the thing that really sealed it was using a comma instead of a period.

Shut up. Worse mod just wouldn't have done it as well as Shut up, worse mod does.

It's the small pause that adds to the suspense that finally kills you. You're already writhing in pain from the strong admonition to keep your mouth shut, and then before you can even get your wits back, it comes. Worse mod.

I particularly think the added effect of making up new grammar rules helps too. It lends more panache to the surprise.

Believe me, I'm taking notes.




I felt it hard as well, like a low blow from tyson in the back end of the 12 th round, its a shot that even though it isn't a scoring shot you feel hard none the less. When i am up against a mind, a genius, a myth and a legend such as smartt i know i have to bring my A game. Otherwise the brilliant mind from brazil will make me look foolish, like fayner in a chi town gangbang house party with sammura on the menu (i have set myself up for another two weeks worth of nightmares with that comment).
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