Quote:

Actually, outside of the second paragraph where she drones on about her 'Aquarian mind' that's pretty well written.




the problem is that gramatically correct drivel is still just drivel. if you read a paragraph and it doesn't speak to you, doesn't pull you in, totally devoid of wit, then it's just typing practice/therapeutic writing, and not writing. and don't ask me how I know.

maybe she should look into some accounting classes and put delusions of NYT best seller lists on the back burner. either that or re-type the great gatsby (ugh) or any other classic about six times before trying her 'art' again. better just go with the accounting classes.