That was pretty funny, Dirty.

I actually think she has a nice body. I'm not a fan of the pissing/squirting thing, though. Also, you need to tone it down with the talking in the scene. You seem like someone who might be a little fun or very annoying. Still, you're pretty fit.
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"I always find it funny when chicks say that, because I hate sex but I still have it. Afterwards, I hate myself, I feel awful, dirty and sometimes cry. But it's worth it, if only to feel a little human every now and then."