Sorry but maybe I misunderstood, are you asking to critique the girl or the photo composition?

My opinion of the girl (with the additional photos provided, thank you very much) is she looks a little soft for my personal tastes but I wouldn't hesitate to book her for a shoot, anal or no.

Just keep her out of tight clothes that would cause fat rolls.
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