The problem isn't punctuation - she skipped her English Composition class, at least the part about how to organize thoughts into well-supported statements.

That said, the part about condoms makes me think she gets it better than most in porn and nearly all outside of porn. The idea was right but few people will untangle that mess to realize it.

Maybe sent her a Strunk & White for her birthday?
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