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I have issues with authority. I’m a rebel with a shul. I like writing about the people society rejects but I don’t want them in my personal life.

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First lesson: Don't treat your dating profile as a pathetic attempt at a plug for your failed writings from years past.

Put up a picture of you from well, within the last five years, preferably GO TAKE A PICTURE OF YOURSELF TODAY, and specifically mention its from recently; even if you're overweight and fat, hit them with your honesty. Women in the online dating world respect that more than pics from almost last century.

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I like to be around smart people who make me laugh. I hate conflict in my personal life. I have enough through my writing. I hate irresponsibility and laziness.

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And 98% of the world have the same sentiments; what makes *YOU* unique. Why did your last relationship fail? What do you view this potential date as? A rebound, starting over, something for the hell of it?

What type of Judaism are you into? Be more specific about that. Thats like saying you drive a "sedan;" it doesn't tell you anything.

What type of woman are you into age wise? Give a minimum and maximum age and WHY.

You mention Air Supply 17 times in two paragraphs; mention it *once* along with all your other interests: movies, media platforms (are you a Mac or PC guy?), TV shows, other bands you're into.

Take this example:
Air Supply's playing some casino down here in San Diego sometime soon; if that's your first date, say, seeing Air Supply at some Indian Casino (which is likely the only venue they even play anymore), would you gamble? Would you go to the buffet line? Would you simply show up for the show and leave? Would you get a hotel room down there for the show with your Shelley Luben ad money? Would this casino conflict with your Jewish beliefs?

Certainly you're proof that the world of porn is demoralizing to men and gives them no real world confidence, but you can change all that.

You can do it Luke!