Quote:

Quote:

"Almost inconceivably, the gun into which she was now staring was clutched in the pale hand of an enormous albino with long white hair."

edge of your seat stuff!



I have not read the book and generally steer clear of this sort of thing, but that excerpt interests me. I think it's a fine sentence.






That book is literally filled with those kinds of sentences.
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"All my years in p*rn didn't quite prepare me for childbirth. I mistakenly thought all the stretching I did would make this easier."